tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post5084965879766905923..comments2023-07-02T09:29:55.764-04:00Comments on KmercPoetry: Gently He WeepsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-13444412262362225492015-03-11T17:38:30.561-04:002015-03-11T17:38:30.561-04:00I was kind of aiming for the nursery rhyme concept...I was kind of aiming for the nursery rhyme concept because I thought it would convey the innocence portion of the message in the poem. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-45333621928750157022015-03-09T22:53:28.360-04:002015-03-09T22:53:28.360-04:00It does have a nursery rhyme feel..little boy blue...It does have a nursery rhyme feel..little boy blue..do not cry...I like the shape of the poem as well. It looks like an hour glass as the sands of time slip through each line.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-30915839726830028582015-03-06T03:55:19.541-05:002015-03-06T03:55:19.541-05:00When I wrote this I had intended for it to serve a...When I wrote this I had intended for it to serve as a sort of lullaby. Something to tell your child just before they went to bed. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-5675000175665698732015-03-04T19:57:30.409-05:002015-03-04T19:57:30.409-05:00Very touching poem. I am glad that the moon cared ...Very touching poem. I am glad that the moon cared enough to comfort the weeping child.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com