tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post8857666254568645052..comments2023-07-02T09:29:55.764-04:00Comments on KmercPoetry: LilyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-81733603832040412742015-01-18T23:13:56.794-05:002015-01-18T23:13:56.794-05:00For the most part. The end was a little bitter swe...For the most part. The end was a little bitter sweet, but overall it was a heart warming piece. Just wanted to throw in that punch at the end because it draws the reader back into reality where everything isn't always silver and gold. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-47077014122969510192015-01-18T22:03:10.437-05:002015-01-18T22:03:10.437-05:00a poem of hope... nicea poem of hope... niceWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-24675405036822213342015-01-17T20:37:58.549-05:002015-01-17T20:37:58.549-05:00I almost didn't include some of the lines that...I almost didn't include some of the lines that were in this. This poem was suppose to be just about a flower, but it kind of bloomed into something else as I continued to write. As for the ending, did you like it? I thought it was a nice bitter sweet ending to something wonderful. Just like in life. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-37236697944855095132015-01-17T20:36:38.592-05:002015-01-17T20:36:38.592-05:00Nah it is all good Gail. I think that your ten wor...Nah it is all good Gail. I think that your ten word poems worked well together and individually. Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment. Much obliged. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-39734333526149316972015-01-17T20:35:21.620-05:002015-01-17T20:35:21.620-05:00Guess I'm turning out to be a fine young poet ...Guess I'm turning out to be a fine young poet according to you. :) Glad you liked it. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-78544145205826557432015-01-17T19:58:52.211-05:002015-01-17T19:58:52.211-05:00Whew, this poem really took me on a journey. It s...Whew, this poem really took me on a journey. It seemed so very sweet and caring.....until the very end. Smiles!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-87722845122456453882015-01-17T15:08:27.139-05:002015-01-17T15:08:27.139-05:00Kenia is right, you do see all things around you.
...Kenia is right, you do see all things around you.<br /><br />Thanks for coming by to visit. I could not do just ten. I wrote ten and did ten more and then ten more. They are separate but hopefully they can go together.<br /><br />I leave my response here because I have no email to reply to when you make a comment. Hope you don't mind. Thanks for visiting.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-4943138465501206782015-01-17T14:27:45.301-05:002015-01-17T14:27:45.301-05:00You know what I like most about it? That you obser...You know what I like most about it? That you observe the world around you, that your beautiful eyes don't fail to see such things, and that you can translate your emotions into words so we can read it here. :)<br /><br />(Am online exclusive for you now)Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.com